Could you ever resist something like me?by ~XxxJayMuffinxxX

Traditional Art / Other

''Could you ever resist something like me? face it I'm just to sexy for you''
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Lol the start of my Rainbowchus/Trickles project eue starting with their desu leader.

Lets face it Cyan is pretty desu

I had this idea in my head for some time and it came out pretty decent :3

This is also a sort of I'm sorry gift for Michi lD <3

Art (c) Me

Rainbowchus/Cyan (c)

Critique by *Reptileon Dec 31, 2012, 4:58:30 AM

Ok, first things first. I'm not gonna use the stars because I have no idea whatsoever how to use them LMAO

Except maybe the impact because this has IMPACTIOOOOO
On second thoughts nu ._.

K, I'll start the Critique now.

Let's start with the legs. The knees are a bit crooked and could be fixed, like you could make them smoother, or less sharp and pointed. The right leg (our view) is fine, it's just the foot that seems off. This could be fixed by making it point to the right, so we could see a side view of it.

The glowing effects are great Jay C: And the hands are great too. Although maybe next time you can tone the chest fur down a little, as there's a bit TOO much there.

K I'm done Dun keel me.

What do you think?

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